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Open Poetry #29
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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
0 posted 2003-10-08 06:24 PM

So often words, are cheap and thin
more often eyes see deep within
and sometimes we know, we won't win
against a truth that's proved by sin

So many words, are twisted things
the truth we gave to silly kings
who sought the truth that power brings
and never heard songs beauty sings

So I will sing both true and loud
of things I meant and love I vowed
and never cover with truths shroud
the things I said, with my head bowed
© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-10-08 07:08 PM


Bravo!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-08-2003 07:13 PM).]
angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-10-08 07:09 PM

This is greaaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Crystal
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-10-08 07:11 PM

Take a bow, Dear Jason! A very fine poem!


EA
Gina Culliney
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4 posted 2003-10-13 11:49 PM

Words so simple yet strong and beautiful.
Hark! me thinks I hear singing!
Well penned as always.  Does your pen never run out of ink???
garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-10-14 05:30 AM

Jason, you are such an excellent writer. I
love the way you rhymed in this one.
Hugs  
Ethel
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