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How Silent
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How Silent |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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How Silent There is more to me than meets the I, "off the wall" and "lost and found" and millions of miles of road thought, endless dreams to fall before you, laid at your feet on run-on pages of white from blue. Call me any day and you will see me hiding those thorns that are skin-wedged failing to be removed so as to remind me, I am not immune to pain, the reality of falsehoods, nor the weariness of soul. It's in my eyes some say, or maybe in my smile, whose lips part to show the fading dimples, born to capture and hold the looks of others. Eyes that have shed too many tears of knowing and lips that have kissed too few...too few. I am selling my soul to the highest bidder, the fog having coated my morning, its dampness matching my spirit and the "because of you" written by fingers, etching the glass of Alice's dreams, leaving her kiss for all to see: two lips parted, whispers escaping turning page upon page of white on blue. M for Alice "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bravo! A little sad at the ending there...but overall a very good read indeed. Thanks for posting this one nakdthoughts. Enjoying your work immensely this morning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I am enjoying following your path... thank you  M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
M~ Loved it!! Susan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliceWynterBlissNaked~ You've got sooo many good lines in this piece~ It's sooooo YOU ! And delightfully so~ Especially like - 'It's in my eyes some say, or maybe in my smile, whose lips part to show the fading dimples, born to capture and hold the looks of others. Eyes that have shed too many tears of knowing and lips that have kissed too few...too few.' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
There is more to me than meets the I, "off the wall" and "lost and found" and millions of miles of road thought, endless dreams to fall before you, laid at your feet on run-on pages of white from blue. *SMILING* I really enjoyed these lines M, this is so like what we love to see from you...hugs. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Glad you loved it Susan.. I think many of us can relate to each others feelings and words...like a sisterhood. hugss M Well Margie deer, I am always reminded about my smile and those dimples if noticed and that Alice..well she keeps showing up in my mirror..to instigate hugss M Thank you Donna...it's nice to see you on here more. I hope you are feeling much better.  M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-08-2003 02:50 PM).] |
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