Open Poetry #29 |
The Uknown ....(Earth Angels Challenge) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
That night I recall in vision so clear, I was only twelve or so. A nightly routine of kissing Dad on the cheek Then off to bed I would go. That old house with the built in stairwell That seemed so very, very closed in And I with my hand on the door Opened it and took the first step in. Somehow, for some strange reason That night was the night that it did begin, and then it began to happen not once, but again and again... A sensation, yes it was the first but by far not the last of this floating up the stairs onto myself my eyes were cast. A struggle to pull myself down To where my feet could touch the wood Yes, it frightened me some, But yet I couldn’t help wonder if it should…. There were many times that followed that first night When I seemed to float upon the air It had become a regular occurrence But I was afraid this story with others to share. It was midnight when she woke me up… She thought I was merely having a dream But I know what happened that night I was floating above me again it seemed. It was so very different on this night It had never quite happened this way before Usually it would start down at the foot Of the stairways by the upstairs door. Oh, how I was frightened that night, Like I had to pull me back into me But now it doesn’t seem so scarey Sometimes I wonder if it was just a spirit Learning to be free… Those days have long since passed It happened mainly in my youth And those other events that have happened Can never be proven as being the truth. That was the end of the ‘floating’ But the beginning of the ‘dreams’ The visions so vivid in my mind Previewing to me those ‘tomorrow scenes.’ Some people call them premonitions Although sometimes to me they were a worry Alas, that’s another time and place And held within is it’s own story….. 10-08-03 It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-08-2003 09:50 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes I wonder if it was just a spirit Learning to be free… ~*~ Oh, Exactly! What a wonderful revelation, and how Earth Angel will enjoy the discovering of another free spirit... You named yourself well dear...Gentle Spirit... because it was always there, inside! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, not only are you "Gentle" but you are full of light and "Spirit". You truly are a spirit in human form and that spirit longs to be free. Do not be afraid to give it the rein it needs during your hours of "sleep". Your intuitiveness and sensitivity enable you to be the creative soul that you are--as is evident in your beautiful poetic works. Since our collaboration I knew in my heart of hearts that you and I are kindred spirits. This was a very special response to my challenge! Thank you, my friend. God bless you and yours, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this is truly just a wonderful metaphysical experience and you speak of these visions and spirits ever so well! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful reply, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was absolutely wonderful and a challenge well met. Crystal |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone for reading the past with me and thanks to Linda for the challenge... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ I *smile* in gentle knowing~ Lovely share ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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