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Lone Star New Member
since 2003-08-15
Posts 6Iowa |
Friends Passing Through She heard a sound As she sat on the cold floor And tunred to see Who had come through the door. “Would you like some coffee?” He smiled and said. What a nice Man! Was the first thought in her head. As she sat at her desk The very next day, She wondered who the attractive man was That had come her way. Nearly a year after that first meeting They became co-workers at night. A friendship began to grow That felt so right. Even then They were quite reserved Talked some about their relationships, But nothing inappropriate occurred. She was happy in her marriage So everyone thought But should the truth be known She was quite distraught. As time passed A feeling began to grow An attraction to this man Much more than he would know. This was new to her Because for so long, She was unhappy, but faithful And life went on. She changed jobs then And didn’t see this shy man. She missed the friendship That had only just begun. Fate had brought them together And now though buildings apart, The friendship grew through e-mail As did a deep connection in the heart. They became Best Friends, then lovers, Though it was wrong, But now they were Soul Mates The need was strong. He taught her love And passion she never knew. He gave her the courage to do What she needed to do. She ended that unhappy marriage And walked out one day. He gave her confidence in herself Supported here every step of the way. Then it was his turn For trials of the heart. His wife chose a different lifestyle, He chose to part. Now he needed her support As his Best Friend. And she was there for him, Through thick and thin. They had a bond, a Love, She believed was so strong But in reality, She was so wrong. Turbulent barely describes The next few years, She cried and cried A billion tears. She still loves him, There’s nothing more true. He had shown her the way, He had helped her get through. She reflects on that friendship And the nearly five years that have passed. Has the need for each other gone away Or is this a bond that will truly last? She wonders what keeps them together today, Or if any of it was true. They are Soul Mates no more, Were they just Friends passing through? |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lone Star, welcome again to Passions. This is a well-written first post. Sad, but pretty. You are a good writer.  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions. Ethel...garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Welcome Deb. A captivating story of some truthful and trying moments in a life... Makes me ponder the complexity of this existence and social conditionings... -MVS You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/ [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (08-15-2003 11:20 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Welcome to Passion's.I hope you enjoy it ehre as much as I do.Thhis was sad and full of deep emotion, but well penned. angelblueyes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Deb, this is a very beautifully sad debut, dearest friend, I believe we should never overlook the light we see in anothers eyes and tears as there we truly find beauty and whatever happens always hold it true to heart to know you have a friend in you forever! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, here's angel hugs for you! Welcome to Passions, sweet Deb, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Deb, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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