Open Poetry #28 |
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I Love |
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Strawberry_Princess New Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 5 |
I love I love the air I love the trees I love the flowers that home the bees Every day i awake and see my love at stake Trash dirt mildew it's everywhere. It's even in your hair. So stop the pollution It's creating a commotion For my love... -Kim Klide |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
WONDERFUL write, doll! Welcome to PIP ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your youth is refreshing, in so much as your poem was stifling. You certainly got the point across!!! I hope you will stay awhile, I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kim~ Welcome to Passions~ How appealing to see your love for our Mother Earth ... a breath of fresh air for sure~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Strawberry My favorite jam, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I do believe we think you're going to enjoy yourself, and we will enjoy your poetry. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) This is a very beautifully heartaching debut, sweet friend, I too am a fond tree-hugger and I cry for Mother Nature as she is the true monarch of Earth and the true beauty of this world! I pray she will be saved too sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Great write and read my friend ![]() |
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