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MoniDaPoet
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0 posted 2003-08-14 01:37 AM



Last night I died
And told the light
I wish to be buried in a fecund pasture
Rife in rainbow blooms
I wish to be the taunting ghost
Of reckless lovers long past
I wish to raise my arm above my heart
While on the fastest coaster.
Ah, to be the lively dead!




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1 posted 2003-08-14 01:39 AM


very cool write...welcome to Passions!
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2 posted 2003-08-14 02:52 AM


Welcome to Passions, will be looking for more of your poetry.  I hope you will find your way around in the forums, and read the guidelines, etc. as it is a BIG place.
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3 posted 2003-08-14 06:09 AM


We gonna get along just fine....I like your point of view!

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4 posted 2003-08-14 07:44 AM


Welcome to Passions.  
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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5 posted 2003-08-14 10:53 AM


Monica~
Welcome to Passions circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2003-08-14 12:00 PM


Welcome to passions


Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-08-14 12:04 PM


"I wish to be the taunting ghost
Of reckless lovers long past"

Oh that reminds me of the door-door sales guy again..lmao

This was a cool write indeed!!!  I love your name! And Welcome, welcome, welcome!!!

I look forward to reading more..

Susan  

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8 posted 2003-08-14 12:25 PM


What an interesting and unique little poem. The title grabbed my attention--and it delivered!

Hi, Moni! Welcome to Passions!--a family of kindred poets who love to read and write poetry!

Warm welcoming hugs,

Earth Angel

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9 posted 2003-08-14 11:17 PM


Hello Monica  

I enjoyed your
first post and look
forward to reading more
of your poems. And...

Ethel
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10 posted 2003-08-14 11:22 PM


Welcome to PiP!

We can always use some some more lively dead around here.

*smile*

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11 posted 2003-08-26 11:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) So many times many just let themselves wither away after something unfortunate occurs, to live while feeling dead inside is truly a blessing, which only proves you were never dead, just temporarily scarred! Raise your arms to the sun, because you are worth it, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Monica, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Monica, thank you for sharing!

  

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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