Open Poetry #28 |
Jazz Rebellion |
symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Positioning their mic Everybody get ready Take a seat, open your ears Sound bouncing off the walls Hitting your ears as another sip reaches your lips Take a puff, put it down, do it again The stale, dim lights bring half-lit, smokey faces Fingers doing unorthodox combos Fingers lightly bouncing from one key to another without a care Muffled, grissley voices accompaning Solos combining for the end Clapping fuels the beat Begging for another song to start |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice title...enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, ST...enjoyed the poem, and looking forward to more. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed your poem, good work! Welcome to passions |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
beautifull, i think you really captured the feeling of a jazz club jazz is truly amaizng aand when you put it like this its even better welcome |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Yes, let's bluesy up this joint and let the saxophonist and the 12-string guitarman take center stage, here's a ring side seat of poetic perfection, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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