Open Poetry #28 |
To See |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
To See Once I lost a love. Taken aback, I wanted her back. She refused to return to me. In a season my eyes were opened to see. Why should I want a woman that doesn't want me? JamesLee August14 2003 |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
brilliant in its brevity. I like. /pip/Forum81/HTML/000811.html |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thats how it goes james, dontu know that.......once you have her, the chase is over |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you eminor and inked... Inkedgoddess you must be right...some women don't want to stick around they just want to share a few dances...then off for some new adventures...I'm like that myself sometimes...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Michele is right!! Once they have you they start wondering what else there is..grrrrrrr James~The writing is very well done and true..find someone that wants you...love and happiness should not be a struggle! Kiss~ Susan |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, if only everybody could think this straight before being stubborn at times! Love, Margherita |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..JamesMichael../\..thanks; enjoyed the poem.. ../\..Spiros -------------calm------------ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
If she doesn't want you then she doesn't know hte joy she's missing angelblueyes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Glad you came to see even if it took a season. Smart man. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Susan, Margherita, Spiros, angelblueyes, vandana and Janette for the nice responses... Janette my thoughts changed as I grew weary of the pain...letting go is the best policy...James |
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