Open Poetry #28 |
Wedding Gifts |
eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Wedding gifts Dearly beloved pale skin clothed in white silk something old, new, borrowed Black and blue We gather here today Befores safe loses its meaning In the angles of broken Bones in the kitchen To celebrate The triumph of rabid power Over the meek The union Of skull and floor Fist and cheek Of man and wife . . . |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Wonderful! Abuse agian! I am beginning to worry about you. Prehaps this is your way of telling others about what is going on. Keep writing! I'm listening! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I am gut-punched. this is both riveting and disturbing...and the message; only for artistic effect, i pray. Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi eminor_angel... I have to agree with everyone else, I do hope this is purely poetic, and not a personal experience. Definitely heart wrenching. Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
no, this isn't my own story, thank goodness. does anyone have ideas for titles? I want to change it. |
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