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Open Poetry #28

Escape

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-13 03:23 PM

Escape

in the heat
of the day
I think
of escaping
to the shade
to make love
in the gentle
breath of wind
of sheltered trees
hidden away
from prying eyes

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-13 04:01 PM

Helen,

This one hits the spot..like a cool drink.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-13 09:22 PM

You want to stay away from prying eyes..keep posting here..lol Their loss you are one of PIP's best, acknowledged or not hugs

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-14 02:52 AM

just beautiful Helen

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-08-14 06:07 AM

Yes...those quiet times, not in a particular location, just "away".....nothing like 'em.

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Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2003-08-16 04:00 PM

*sigh*

I really do like this one Helen.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Jordyn05
Member

since 2003-07-17

Posts 62

6 posted 2003-08-16 04:02 PM

Fanstic poem Helen.

Keep on posting.

Jordyn

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

7 posted 2003-08-16 04:13 PM

This is beautiful... It was thoroughly enjoyed.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-08-16 04:24 PM

I so enjoyed your words this summer afternoon...what a great escape!

Patricia

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