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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dust I sweep my dust into a heap And pat it down to go to sleep And asked the wind to leave it there A sigh that holds my love and care A phantom lives within the dust A knight that rides in armored rust Seeking heaven and its worth Since his birth upon this earth He’s ridden far and wide the scene Even ridden in his dream Ridden down his every lead Alas they all have gone to seed. Both head of knight and horse are down His face is fixed into a frown He sings a song to keep him cheer He sings out loud my love is here As favor that is pinned his mail Points in breeze where he must trail. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my Sy...once again in sync... me with my stardust and you sweeping it up...LOL... Good morning our Sy... back to the top with you!  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I sweep my dust into a heap And pat it down to go to sleep And asked the wind to leave it there A sigh that holds my love and care Oh...I so love this. Just lovely... Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely Sunday Morn write Sy! Wonderful way to start my day! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Both head of knight and horse are down His face is fixed into a frown He sings a song to keep him cheer He sings out loud my love is here Another wonderful write to start our days with Seymour! Besides singing a song to keep in cheer.....here are some apple tarts I know you'll like my dear.  hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning love.  Patricia Thank you for the lovely. Nancy, Be right there for tea my dear. Chris, Be right there for the apple tarts. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I sweep my dust into a heap And pat it down to go to sleep And asked the wind to leave it there A sigh that holds my love and care Oh Seymour, I would love to look through your dust. LOL  Hugs   Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I sweep my dust into a heap And pat it down to go to sleep And asked the wind to leave it there A sigh that holds my love and care ========================== Star dust ... gold dust ... silver dust ... fairy dust.  all your poetry belongs in a  *ww*  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, I'll leave you some. LOL JM, As Gleason would say, "you're the geatest." WWRS |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I sweep my dust into a heap And pat it down to go to sleep And asked the wind to leave it there A sigh that holds my love and care ********* The only dust I can find is on my pillows from lack of sleep.  Wonderful lead in verse and as always, you feed the mind to begin wondering where it is going to lead. ********* Both head of knight and horse are down His face is fixed into a frown He sings a song to keep him cheer He sings out loud my love is here As favor that is pinned his mail Points in breeze where he must trail. ************ Excellent writing from beginning to end but the above lines really give much to this piece. It is always a pleasure to read your works and this one is no exception. Well done sir. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I think your dust is poetic gold! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful , poetic way to pen of dust .... enjoyed this one Seymour , a truly dusty way to brighten my day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sy you always get me with what you write about and how I suppose I talk to the wind now and then too  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, A man after my own heart, thank you my friend. Martie, You are free to pan whenever you like. LOL HopeS, Some times the dust will brighten the sun. Thank you love. passing, Surely a misnomer. Thank you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. +*+*+ Good Knight! Sweet dreams!  +*+*+* EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Your will make them sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Then here is a for you! Sweet dreams! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, you sir are a true poet and have once again penned gold. I love this~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
If at first you don't succeed..try try again. It's not over 'til it's over. As long as there is breath there's still a chance for what this knight seeks. I love reading this!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
I hope my style matures into something as fluid as yours. -ian |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, You are a love. SharaRose It's never over till it's over. LOL Thank you. scuffedshoe2 You have a lovely style, thank you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy...I don't know how these slip by me, but I sure do enjoy uncovering them later. Agreeing with Martie...poetic gold... If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes You are a doll thank you sweet. |
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