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Open Poetry #28

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MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-09-08 04:01 AM

I’m sitting in my cold room just killing time,

Or maybe I should say,

Time is killing me.

As I read page 1977,

From the book of Ironic tales (Chapter 46 – Dead and loving it),

I realise I have wasted so much precious time.

As sure as daybreak,

As pure as innocence,

As obscure as art,

Time only waits for a new beginning.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-09-08 04:04 AM

I too have wasted precious time...and another day passes

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-08 04:10 AM

nice write,,,

jbsoria
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 26
Phoenix, Arizona

3 posted 2003-09-08 05:06 AM

The next time I catch myself wasting time, I'll try to remember that last line,
"Time only waits for a new beginning."
Excellently put.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-09-08 05:11 AM

Mercury...so much truth and wisdom in this.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

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