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Seven Veils
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Seven Veils |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Seven Veils He sails a path of fantasy His moon, his stars, his ecstasy But in the woods grow mushroom stools Where still remain realities rules? He set his course a spirits voyage But in the hole his lifetime stowage His daily search is shoals of white Where dance the phantoms of his night. Many a whale had passed his beam With wakes that really rocked his dream But water stays beneath his bow And still he sails his holy cow. He seeks a land of non exist An Eden’s garden he can’t resist It is to him his only goal The doorway to his very soul And so this ancient mariner sails Through humanities seven veils. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Many view in poem Not sure I understand all, but like poem Is poem compare to dance of seven veils? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as one veil then drops don't fail to stop the dream Good morning, Sy...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Never stop dreaming Sy! Good morning love... Tea with me today?  ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lotus, You could say that. It's just fancy words for a simple dream. Thank you. Sunshine, Good morning dear, I don't think I'll ever stop dreaming.  Nancy, Sunday tea sounds good to me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dear Travelin' Tumbleweed! "But in the woods grow mushroom stools Where still remain realities rules?" ~ Aye, there's the rub! "Many a whale had passed his beam With wakes that really rocked his dream But water stays beneath his bow And still he sails his holy cow." ~ Take a bow for these creative thoughts that end with a witty play on words. "He seeks a land of non exist An Eden’s garden he can’t resist" ~ To seek as ye do, ye shall surely find your Eden. "And so this ancient mariner sails Through humanities seven veils." ~ Indeed you do! And thank you for taking this reader along on the voyage!  EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Many a whale had passed his beam With wakes that really rocked his dream But water stays beneath his bow And still he sails his holy cow. ================================ YOU are poetry's holy cow and your rhymes are the cat's meow.  that verse is cooler than the dictionary has definition for... and so is the poet. *winkiewinkie*   |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What Janet Marie said, because she says it so gooooddd LOL Morning Seymour  Hope you have a good one, my friend Hugs to you   Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Holy Cow, Seymour, this took me on quite a trip! I love that creative mind of yours. ~K~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You weave such beautiful morning magic~ Thank you, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ *Hmmm, I've got a 'Seven Veils' piece on a back burner ... think I'll see if I can stir it* ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
An old wise man once said..... Hmmmmm? A young wise man once said.... Duhhhh! From dreams are made the foundation of our earth's cultures and technologies.... And too is love... or life after life... Nicely done Sir Sy.... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well done,,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I loved this Sy! Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you so much for the lovely reply. JM, You better keep cool me in the fridge or I'll melt all over you. WWRS Ethel, Thank you sweetheart. Kahlil, And I love your replies. Marge , And huglets back to you. Barry, Thank you so much for the read and comments. QjQ Thank you for the well done. Susan, THank you for the read and loved it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Son of a gun Janet Marie took my line AGAIN Sy So will I will just have to say, Holy Cow, Sy, every day you have magical words to say, That simply take my breath away. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
He seeks a land of non exist An Eden’s garden he can’t resist It is to him his only goal The doorway to his very soul Wonderful Seymour. Much needed dreamy write to-day as I am in alot of pain with this darned tendonitis in my left arm. This too shall pass - the sooner the better. Sorry I am late with our snacks, but I am sure Enchantress will put on the kettle again and we can have some scrumptious butter tarts. Hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, Yes that Janet Matie is fast and smart. But you are a sweet heart. Chris, Sorry about the tendonitis Maybe a will help. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your words are like magic and your heart is the magician that enlightens our every mornings.Yeah!!!Yeah!!!! Yeah!!!!! Crystal |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Sy You haven't lost your magical touch. This is a delight to read as usual. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
angelblueyes Thank you for the sweet reply. ethome, Thank you my friend. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
very nice, you salty poet dog you... Ed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Even a salty dog wags his tale. LOL |
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