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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Do not fall short of perspectives Swallow the entrance insurmountable Depth which can be seen within Harmony of lighted water Stands with you in flesh and bone Swimming into faithful candles Wind-powered contentment of moods Pulling inwardly the moon Metamorphosis glowing a bath Threading archives of a exquisite force By the eyelids of solar eclipse Lighting spiritual fires everywhere Arcs made of dawn’s clairvoyance poised Within the sense of an unbreakable acquaintance Somewhere between concept and time Pouring golden sensations in the air Catching all bitter shadows Incredible ensemble of metaphors, fair haired Ravenous state of springtime Through a portal imbued with mingled feathers Working purpose through elements multiple embers Forestalling color, exchanging sparks of starlight Altering shapes flickering a timepiece Growing golden hours languid where sunlight turns to honey Like the tranquility of a loved one’s mouth Permeating sparkle beating heavenly Inspiring you…yourself…whispering when the mind is elsewhere An unbreakable bond…poised discernible filters Being drawn in by the sea’s enchantment This vast unmistakable air grooming dreams The sensations of your presence…glamour’s ceaselessly Gathering me there free of charge to live life’s flowerets Outside dispersed labels, branching deeply into caverns Which charm the most precious of atmospheric song Interpreting knowledge rolling out mythological symphony Gestures and the source enacts, balanced suavely Seduction of light, spilling out all effortless secrets There at the entrance, waiting, watching, hoping Rapture takes wind keeping the very last spark of glide A loved one…as a most intricate collage Necessary and most different…feeding air with living hues An ensemble within, visible images, thesaurus of your muse Life, truth and passions virtue, entering your soul, heart and mind |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Perhaps this could be my favourite of yours yet, and yet it manages to lie here with no replies. insane. so glad i found this treasure. too many lines to quote. As ever, womanly wise. I'm off to read this again.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."thesaurus of your muse" YOUR muse, Dear Lee, IS a thesaurus!  You are a talented writer who has heart, soul--and a mind!   Linda |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful,,, lady poetess |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
My printer's running now -- at this moment. For a while, maybe weeks, your poem is going to be on the desk in front of my monitor, where I can read it and be reminded of the things that I try to do as a poet....or try to try to do. Thanks for this. I needed it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, this is very, very good. I especially like this ending. An ensemble within, visible images, thesaurus of your muse Life, truth and passions virtue, entering your soul, heart and mind Very beautiful, lady.  Hugs Ethel (like your new picture) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lee J A treasure of word pleasure here. Much enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You truly are a thesaurus. And a delight to read. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Where are you lady? we miss you. enjoyed reading this again.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to agree with EA here.You are the spirit of an angel, the soul of dove, the heart of the heavens, and the spirit of the lion.Your writes always intrigue and evoke such great thought from me. Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is one of my favorites of yours, as well.. |
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