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Chameleon
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0 posted 2003-09-02 08:11 AM



A glimpse of you and I
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On second glance if I find some space,
I find another glimpse of you and me.
From the eyes of a passer-by,
two lost dolphins rising and playing, as well as kissing, underneath the deep blue sea.

I can't help to tremble in your presence,
its just something you acquire with your light blue eyes and your china-doll like face.

Every day makes it harder, self -inflicted- internal murder.
But every day could be such more easier, if I could just bottle your sweet kisses in a jar.

© Copyright 2003 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-09-02 12:28 PM


Nicholas . . . yes, it is hard being away from the one you love , this is beauty
xxoo

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2003-09-07 03:26 PM


Chameleon, this is so beautiful. I
really enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
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3 posted 2003-09-07 06:39 PM


This is sweet, I enjoyed it.
Crystal

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