Open Poetry #28 |
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For An Instant |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
For but an instant of time, the shimmer of radiant eyes as the silent sweep of a lighthouse beacon illuminates the beauty of you. Shivering at the thought, the want of a tender soft touch. The taste of moist lips yielding to a moment shared so passionately. You know of my yearn, the desire of you. You have sensed it each moment I have been near. The delicate feel of your hands within mine, the smell of hair lightly tickling my face.The feel of your breath as each moment brings a rush, an impatience to the life that each inhalation gives. I could hold you endlessly here, as sea breezes caress your face. Warming you as I hold you close to my heart. Feeling your own heart beating, knowing that each beat carries your own passion and desire... Come, walk with me among the dunes, share the shimmer of a full moon’s set as morning hovers gently beneath a blanket of shimmering stars....shining as brilliantly as your eyes, matching mine. [This message has been edited by Magnus (09-06-2003 05:57 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Come, walk with me among the dunes, share the shimmer of a full moon’s set as morning hovers very nicely penned,, sir poet |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you write beauty |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I could hold you endlessly here, as sea breezes caress your face. Warming you as I hold you close to my heart. Feeling your own heart beating, knowing that each beat carries your own passion and desire... Oh my goodness, Barry.... I do love it when you write romance. Whew!! I'm keeping this one. ![]() Hugs, my friend ![]() Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Romance as only you can express it Barry! Love this one...into my library it goes. ~Smiles, Hugs & Sighs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Barry...I believe after I read the first line, I began holding my breath, jaw dropped, and didn't exhale until I finished the last line. This is beautiful...wonderfully romantic and lovely. Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus You romantic old devil, well done. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
AWESOME! TD |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry....Very romantic!!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...you did it again! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It is???? I am?????? I did?????? Thank you, I think..... Yahuh... |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow -- taking a lesson here..."How To Write Romantic Poetry".....This sizzles! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...keeping this wonderfully romatic write of yours... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and what woman in her right mind would not collapse here and say "take me...take me now!" |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
The woman who has these wowrds spoke to her from you is the luckiest woman in the world.She will melt at your words and shine from your heart. ![]() Crystal |
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