navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » For An Instant
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic For An Instant Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-09-06 03:05 PM


For but an instant of time, the shimmer
of radiant eyes as the silent sweep of
a lighthouse beacon illuminates the
beauty of you.

Shivering at the thought, the want of
a tender soft touch. The taste of
moist lips yielding to a moment
shared so passionately.

You know of my yearn, the desire
of you. You have sensed it each
moment I have been near. The
delicate feel of your hands within
mine, the smell of hair lightly
tickling my face.The feel of
your breath as each moment brings
a rush, an impatience to the
life that each inhalation gives.

I could hold you endlessly here,
as sea breezes caress your face.
Warming you as I hold you close
to my heart. Feeling your own
heart beating, knowing that
each beat carries your own
passion and desire...

Come, walk with me among the
dunes, share the shimmer of a
full moon’s set as morning hovers
gently beneath a blanket of
shimmering stars....shining as
brilliantly as your eyes,
matching mine.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (09-06-2003 05:57 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-06 03:11 PM


Come, walk with me among the
dunes, share the shimmer of a
full moon’s set as morning hovers


very nicely penned,,  sir poet

  

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-09-06 03:11 PM


you write beauty
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-09-06 03:14 PM


I could hold you endlessly here,
as sea breezes caress your face.
Warming you as I hold you close
to my heart. Feeling your own
heart beating, knowing that
each beat carries your own
passion and desire...


Oh my goodness, Barry....
I do love it when you write romance. Whew!!
I'm keeping this one.
Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-09-06 04:10 PM


Romance as only you can express it Barry!
Love this one...into my library it goes.
~Smiles, Hugs & Sighs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
5 posted 2003-09-06 05:47 PM


Oh Barry...I believe after I read the first line, I began holding my breath, jaw dropped, and didn't exhale until I finished the last line.  This is beautiful...wonderfully romantic and lovely.

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2003-09-06 07:01 PM


Magnus
You romantic old devil, well done.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2003-09-06 09:34 PM


AWESOME! TD
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
8 posted 2003-09-06 09:36 PM


Barry....Very romantic!!!  
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
9 posted 2003-09-06 09:37 PM



...you did it again!

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
10 posted 2003-09-06 09:39 PM


It is????  I am??????   I did??????

Thank you,  I think..... Yahuh...


Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
11 posted 2003-09-07 10:19 AM


Wow -- taking a lesson here..."How To Write Romantic Poetry".....This sizzles!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

12 posted 2003-09-07 10:22 AM


...keeping this wonderfully romatic write of yours...  ~K~
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
13 posted 2003-09-07 12:59 PM


and what woman in her right mind would not collapse here and say "take me...take me now!"
angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
14 posted 2003-09-07 06:58 PM


The woman who has these wowrds spoke to her from you is the luckiest woman in the world.She will melt at your words and shine from your heart.
Crystal

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » For An Instant

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary