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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-03 03:05 AM

incorrigible
septuagenarian
impecunious

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2003-08-03 10:36 AM

LOL
now I'll go back and count syllables
NOT

enjoyed this one, Q

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-08-03 10:37 AM

BRAVO!!!
it's got the syllable count as well as being a very very cleverly written message

garysgirl

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3 posted 2003-08-03 10:40 AM

WOW!!! Glenn, this is really good!!

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-08-04 12:53 PM

damn cool!

Kaoru

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5 posted 2003-08-04 12:54 PM

Cool, indeed! Creative idea, q.

scuffedshoe2
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6 posted 2003-08-04 01:06 AM

wow...thesaurus addict...

-ian

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-08-04 01:08 AM

You are rich in words though, and I'm sure young at heart. This was very clever!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

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8 posted 2003-08-04 06:16 AM

What a way with words, Q!
A most creative write. How about
a three word haiku next???

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-08-04 06:44 AM

whats the answer?

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-08-04 07:35 AM

Ah me likes..yep like shara said, rich in creativity though..more of these please sir?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2003-08-04 07:42 AM

I liked this

but I liked the writing better...

regards
sudhir

VAS
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12 posted 2003-08-04 01:30 PM

for me, this needs an unabridged dictionary, I believe, to be certain of the meaning held within, but I'm amazed, nonetheless, and when I get home, I'll start looking up these three words.

I'm on my daughter's computer so don't know how to copy and paste to check an online dictionary, at this time.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

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13 posted 2003-08-04 02:13 PM

Now somewhere in the back pages, I've got a three word senryu, myself...

wonder where I put that?

But smiling at yours, y'old devil!

vandana

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14 posted 2003-08-05 08:17 PM

enjoy your read

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-08-05 08:20 PM

--and right you are! That was indeed, a 3-word senryu! I give it a CC rating! Clever & Cute!

EA

vlraynes
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16 posted 2003-09-08 01:12 AM

Very cool, Glenn...enjoyed this.
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Marge Tindal

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17 posted 2003-09-08 09:18 AM

QJQ~
Brilliant~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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