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Open Poetry #28

The Eye of Tranquility

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-07 11:55 PM

Within the storms of one's mind
  the straining of reality
  few moments of time unwind

  the beat of insanity

Still winds increasing, enforced
  ill thoughts that are remaining
  left behind and un-remorsed

  such, lost souls are containing

But one dream ..., one wish, one breath
  is all one life needs two take
  to cause uncertainty's death

  giving the storm chance to break

A vision's ability ...
  the eye of tranquilty

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-07 11:58 PM

very good write n read,,,

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-07 11:59 PM

Your thoughts intrigue me here.well penned.

Crystal

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-09-08 08:57 AM

your words heal broken hearts.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2003-09-08 09:15 AM

Q - thank you for your eyes.

ABE - such words are meant to be intriguing ...
      my work here is well done!

Gem - if only ...
      from one heart to another.
        Thank you  xx

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