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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-11 02:28 PM

To My Beloved
Reflections of the moon grows brighter,
the sounds of waves grows fiegnter,
the outline of moonlight surrounds you,
Sand in and out of everywere that is dear to you,
the sound of another pleases you,
Water streches to each of your feet,
Cold however, you remain relaxed,
the other comforts you further,
The Waves crash against the unoccupied beach,
save it be for two insanely in love beings,
One of the female gender,
the other male,
hailing from different countries,
nothing seperates the pair,
not even the coldness of death would realease them,
He brushes her beautiful body with his fingertips,
gently whispering into her ear,
speaking of his endless love for her,
they embrace in the way of passion,
she holds him tightly,
caressing every inch of his body,
For she knows his stay will not be long,
yet plans of the future may sway,
they wish just once for,
another touch,
another word,
another day,
and...
another sight,
Away one must go,
however which might it be?
male or female?
undesicive the future is,
the two will conference,
however...
next time,
not in thier dreams.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-11 02:40 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-11 02:57 PM

nice visions

welcome to Passions

I'm sure you will love it here...and I'm looking forward to more of your writings

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-08-27 12:35 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is a very beautiful debut, sweet friend, as tragic as these partings must be sometimes, there truly are times also the space can be filled between two! (sigh) I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Amanda, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amanda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-27-2003 12:36 AM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-08-27 02:17 AM

Welcome to Passions!!!! I am looking forward to reading more beautiful writings from you, as this was captivating!!! ~S~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-08-28 04:59 AM

Enjoyable read...where is this beach of love? James

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2004-07-05 02:38 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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