Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2003-08-26
02:18 PM
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A flash in the pan A thought gone from the mind Gone, gone like the last, limp light It sets sail upstream Through unseen, seaweed allegories Escaping wooden eyes and newer days An eagle stalking prey, I go swoop like An owl in the noisy night, killing snakes My entire body in line Perfect, light, streamlined My head moves It swivels on my head like a magnet Is it magic? I see all, this is a mission I see behind me, nightvision The perfect earth around me drops And this is how I fly I am alive A day-sleeper in a time of endless nights In love with the ugly I am
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Amanda Seymour
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
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2003-08-26
09:50 PM
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A day-sleeper in a time of endless nights In love with the ugly I am
Great closing, love this line and good images throughout
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Ratleader
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
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2003-08-26
11:39 PM
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I think you're in love with otherness....and that may be very beautiful indeed. Hold it. Hold it tight.~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-07-05
02:39 AM
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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