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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-26 01:43 AM



Full moon ovulation
phoneline steam and flame
slivers of sky
slice through the window
shoot down the wire
searching for home

Does he know I'm a starfish
spread across a late Pisces moon
alien intoxicated
challenging the perfect earth
broad shouldered

Does he read between the silences
I hang like mist
heart spilled dripping
I cloak the mountain
furnishing the abyss

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1 posted 2003-08-26 01:49 AM


He does, that and more....because you will have told him in many ways.

Us you tell in excellent poetry...him you tell....the way you tell.

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Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-08-26 02:00 AM


great writing nice addition to PIP
wandering glider
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aloft
3 posted 2003-08-26 02:30 AM


siren like . . .
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-08-27 02:41 AM


I have to admit that I am addicted to images in poetry, and you have painted many here for the delight of my mind's eye!!!  Wonderful, and I really like your style...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-07-05 02:38 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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