Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2003-08-26
01:43 AM
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Full moon ovulation phoneline steam and flame slivers of sky slice through the window shoot down the wire searching for home
Does he know I'm a starfish spread across a late Pisces moon alien intoxicated challenging the perfect earth broad shouldered
Does he read between the silences I hang like mist heart spilled dripping I cloak the mountain furnishing the abyss
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Ratleader
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
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2003-08-26
01:49 AM
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He does, that and more....because you will have told him in many ways. Us you tell in excellent poetry...him you tell....the way you tell.~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
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2003-08-26
02:00 AM
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great writing nice addition to PIP
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wandering glider
Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
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2003-08-26
02:30 AM
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siren like . . .
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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
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2003-08-27
02:41 AM
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I have to admit that I am addicted to images in poetry, and you have painted many here for the delight of my mind's eye!!! Wonderful, and I really like your style...~S~Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~
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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-07-05
02:38 AM
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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