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Open Poetry #28

I pushed-senryu

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-11 03:40 AM

I pushed and I shoved
and you gave no ground to me
earning my respect

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-11 04:14 AM

sometimes being strong and steady pays off

good write Jason

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-08-11 09:40 AM

WooHoo! Good for her!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2003-08-11 09:46 AM

Yup good for her indeed!

A great senryu.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-08-11 10:35 AM

Awesome Jason !!
hugs, Chris

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-08-11 12:32 PM

powerful lines, my friend
*smile*
xxoo

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-08-11 01:33 PM

JAso, thisis great.Sometimes being strong is a good thing

angelblueyes

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-08-11 02:13 PM

Oh but this sounds familiar Jason--and yanno? I KNOW I do this and can't seem to help m'self.

excellent observation, here.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-08-11 04:06 PM

like how you wove it altogether in so short a passage......kind of shadowy but there

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-08-11 04:09 PM

Sounds like she's up for your challenges!

Great little write!

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2003-08-12 04:07 PM

good gurl!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2003-08-12 09:25 PM

Great write Jason. TD

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