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I pushed-senryu
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I pushed-senryu |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I pushed and I shoved and you gave no ground to me earning my respect |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes being strong and steady pays off  good write Jason |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WooHoo! Good for her! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup good for her indeed! A great senryu. Maree fate is not just |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome Jason !! hugs, Chris |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
powerful lines, my friend *smile* xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
JAso, thisis great.Sometimes being strong is a good thing angelblueyes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh but this sounds familiar Jason--and yanno? I KNOW I do this and can't seem to help m'self.  excellent observation, here. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like how you wove it altogether in so short a passage......kind of shadowy but there |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like she's up for your challenges!  Great little write!  EA |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
good gurl! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great write Jason. TD |
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