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Justin Genius
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since 2001-04-02
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0 posted 2003-08-07 11:57 AM



Upon one sunny day, not long ago, here at the 'Stute
Nurse Crachet hollered through the halls addressing me: "You mute!"
Now I’ve been called a lot of names, but none of them this brute,
I always thought the staff had manners in this institute.

I have been called ingenious, I have been called a nerd,
But never by a member of the staff - it's most absurd!
The nurse is not supposed to call me any nasty name,
The worst she is supposed to do is poke my little brain.

She irons all the jackets strai(gh)t, but needs variety,
So therefore irons with this Justin still inside to see
If I can scream in steam the words: you're doing a fine job!
She surely knows to turn domestic jobs to something hot.

And one of Crachet's fav'rite toys: catheters of barbed wire!
Now ain't it kewl to have a nurse who sets a man on fire!
And in the rubber room I’m thrilled to hear our Nurse announce,
I'm getting extra time and if I'm good an extra bounce.

No need to tell you folks I am her fav'rite of the Clan
But now she's hurt my feelings and disturbed my Yin & Yang
She called me "mute", I won’t forget until my dying day!
It was unjust Nurse C.! I guess that's all I had to say.

A Justin Measurably Miserable
Justin Genius

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-08-07 01:21 PM


Yes...you convinced me...

Cute.

Susan C.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-07 02:17 PM


No need to tell you folks I am her fav'rite of the Clan
But now she's hurt my feelings and disturbed my Yin & Yang
She called me "mute", I won’t forget until my dying day!
It was unjust Nurse C.! I guess that's all I had to say.


Justin, it's good thing that you are "the favorite". LOL
No telling what would happen to the   least favorite.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-08-07 02:20 PM


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-08-07 03:51 PM


After I read your reply to Toerag's poem, I decided
to go to your homepage, the 'Stute. I really like
that palce and am going to read some of the poems later.
I went to your link to Ron's biography on Passions.
As long as I've been here, I didn't know
that was there. It was very interesting. Thank
you for putting the link there.

Now, I understand your poem better, since I read
some of the background. It's really cute.
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-07-2003 03:52 PM).]

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
5 posted 2003-08-07 05:07 PM



Justin,

your just so sweet I don't know how anything like this ever happened. But I've heard about these kind of places and all I can tell you is to stay on top of it girl. Your my hero...

lucky dale


Justin Genius
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since 2001-04-02
Posts 85

6 posted 2003-08-08 04:26 PM


Mucho gracia Signorina Ethel for visiting our homepage! Justin's incredibly honoured!

Where are the days the 'Stute could be found all over these blue pages? I miss my crazy buddies!

May I thank you all for your replies. What would a Justin be without them... Miss Behavin'?

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!
7 posted 2003-08-12 09:49 AM


Piper down my dear Justin,
it was just a word no cusin.
You claim to be a charmer,
but than you wear such armor.
For me to break through it all
would take me almost to fall.
See, Justin that's a toughie,
you'll be Marshmallow fluffy,
waiting for just the right time.

You remember the rubber room well,
and through it you did quite swell.
No complaints can be garnished,
your attributes nicely varnished.
You've got some issues to address,
for you second guess the word success.
Little earthquakes in rubber rooms,
doesn't mean in a week you will resume,
for it only happens at just the right time.


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-08-12 11:01 AM


not sure if your poetic style gives you away or not but justincase you aren't who I think you are... welcome ... I don't remember reading you, because I wasn't justintime to read you back then.

*s
M

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
9 posted 2003-08-12 09:31 PM


Justin,
Pray tell that this is indeed true?
I'd thought we'd seen the last of you.
Hip, hip, hooray, or as they say
might this not mean that I am too?

I thought I was, but just because
the rest of you were with me then.
Then I was one, what was begun
came to and end, I'd lost my friends!

Oh happy day! (or as they say)
the fruit falls not far from the tree.
The Institute shall never fade
it's more than just a memory.
Doc

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
10 posted 2003-08-12 09:40 PM


enjoyable read


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