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Open Poetry #28

Tommy Saw

Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

0 posted 2003-08-11 08:13 PM

My eager hand crawls on the walls,
as my eyes penetrate through the petty hole
so that I can feast on your heavenly reflection.
In ignorance of me,
you dance so beautifully.
So elagantly,
you speak to me.
One by one, you shed your outer skin
to reveal the real heaven within.
Oh so much do I wish to bleed into you,
together in each other's body
to become one, as if in seduction's brew.
Through my convenient two inch hole,
you slide into another shell.
You become one with the bed
and leave me alone behind this hell.
But still I can see behind your closed eyes;
you're lonely.
Though I'm still behind this wall,
in love with you.
Goodnight,
sleeping beauty.
I'll be here tomorrow.
Same time of day,
when love and death embrace.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-08-11 10:07 PM

nicely written,,,,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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2 posted 2003-08-12 04:15 AM

great ending lines!

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

3 posted 2003-08-12 09:18 PM

Thanks for the comments, guys. And also for readin'.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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