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Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

0 posted 2003-08-10 06:46 PM

Love…do we sing its song beautifully
as do the Sirens so enchanting or the wind
that whispers, born from love’s flames sweetly?

Love; goodness and evil of pleasure and pain.
Songs of sorrow and dances of enjoy, played.
Human emotions made into art. Such beauty.
A play of lips and hearts forevermore
a lasting renaissance for eternity.

Love…a burden more important than that of life
and closer to that of death.
A flame of so bittersweet taste and longing to life,
so let our love’s name be Death.

Love; a fire aching our soul and eating it away.
Burning human’s hearts in its desirable flames.
A diabolic symbol of our wishes we obsess for,
yet we know the very thing will destroy us,
and bleed us at thy very core.

“We desire thy so,
we will die…”

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

[This message has been edited by Third Libra (08-10-2003 07:04 PM).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-08-10 06:49 PM

Wow! this was brilliant!!!! welcome to passions!!!!! hope to read more of your enchanting poetry!!!!!

Thanks~A ROMANTIC HEART

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-10-2003 07:00 PM).]

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

2 posted 2003-08-10 06:54 PM

I agree...subtly enchanting.
Well done, hope 2 read more from u!

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

3 posted 2003-08-10 06:56 PM

haha, thank you both. I'm glad you all liked my write, and for the comforting welcome. Thanks, again.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

4 posted 2003-08-10 06:56 PM

lovely. however, you have two grammatical errors in the line:

As do the Siren’s so enchanting or the wind

to be correct it should be

"As do the Sirens so enchantingly . . ."

beautiful write though, very powerful

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

5 posted 2003-08-10 07:03 PM

Oh, I'm sorry about that. I have put each line with capital letters, and that put some confusion on the grammer. Thanks.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-08-10 10:20 PM

this is what it should be yes.. like the name just curious anything to do with the song 3 libras?

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

7 posted 2003-08-26 06:53 PM

Yea, it's one of my favorite songs from one of my favorite bands. lol, you a fan?

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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