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Who’s Turn Is It?
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Who’s Turn Is It? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Who’s Turn Is It? I ask God to please let you be mine I prayed kneeling in salty liquid even ask a witch for a spell knowing it might send fire on me and I flipped it and lit a candle in your name with it unable to sleep most nights thinking wondering why when I did sleep dreams came searching my worthiness in your face seeing you inches away and inching away who do I cry to now tired of being tired a million words attach themselves to the moon and I am somewhere here in between where are you you are worried about the take maybe this time it was all about the give and one of us being sad is too many "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Slick, sweets.. you amaze me. Brilliant work. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I stopped begging or asking for anything..as for whos turn it is wheres the next verse? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"and one of us being sad is too many" solemn hand-over-heart hugs, helen.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"searching my worthiness in your face seeing you inches away" I can just feel the world going hollow with these lines.....what a poignant way to say it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"one of us being sad is too many"... I like it...  |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
so very sad... so very beautiful.... heartfelt well wishes to you |
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