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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-12 08:11 PM

Opal
birth stone
I
wonder why
watching moon
brings
relief

Dust
you were the white
storm
that woke me
to this
new heaven
on stone

Night preservation
of the millionth
time
we asked these
questions

Something
will make me

let me

ask them again

I know why we collide
leave our marks
behind
upon one another

Who came off worse
I wonder?
neither
either

does it even measure

on a scale

of gun ship stars
that guard
the only beauty

hands
cannot savage

Night drive
covered by guards

when clouds
enclose

does it mean

theres something going on

we were never meant
to see?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-12 09:32 PM

What IS your muse doing to you?
WOW...
and
WOW again...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-12 09:38 PM

OMG!!! This is FANTASTIC!!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-12 11:12 PM

Gooodness, Gemma. This is neat beyond
words. You are getting better and better,
little friend of mine.

BTW, my birthstone is Opal, too.
Hugs, little lady

Ethel

(Have you seen this smilie? Isn't he cute?)

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-09-12 11:25 PM

Oooh Gem!
This is amazing!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-09-13 02:10 AM

damn

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-09-13 03:07 AM

Gemma...WOW...this is some of the best I've
seen from you. EXCELLENT writing! Love this!
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

7 posted 2003-09-13 06:01 AM

Enjoy words on page,
Not sure I catch all meanings, my fault for lack of know

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-09-13 08:19 AM

gem
this is breathtaking
God, I adore your writing

Dust
you were the white
storm
that woke me
to this
new heaven
on stone

Will we ever know?
Why we are placed where we are?
if only for a fleeting moment . . .
Making me think so early
shame on you
*smile*
Beautiful writing
insightful mind
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida