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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-12 04:43 PM

Rhymes of Yesterday

Some days I feel those rhymes of then,
the yesterdays that creep into my mind
and rain down words, lines of verse
reminding me of who I am.

How is it that one day can
make such a difference in one's life
compose me into rhyme or take away
the ending lines and leave me in reverse.

I miss those rhymes of yesterday
the time in hold, the sweet of say
the nakedthoughts in blue display...

Some days I wish for warmth's return
the chill of morn, rising me from dreams,
those that know my between the lines
connecting me to places I have been.

How is it that my table is full,
the setting always waiting for more,
the taste of words softened, yet
in need of seasoning from you.

I miss those rhymes of yesterday
the time in hold, the sweet of say
the nakedthoughts in blue display...

when rhymes meant more than lips could say

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-12-2003 05:13 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-09-12 04:48 PM

SweetSweetLady~

Nothing missing in your dear rhyme~

'the sweet of say'

... always was ... always will be~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-09-12 05:01 PM

Maureen - your words are wonderful and touching as usual. hugs to you, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-12 05:14 PM

I miss those rhymes of yesterday
the time in hold, the sweet of say
the nakedthoughts in blue display...

when rhymes meant more than lips could say

Maureen, I love your rhymes of today.
They're always perfect, though I do know what
you mean.

Hugs, sweet lady

Ethel

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2003-09-12 05:39 PM

Very well done sweets...I won't answer with a poem...LOL....good write..

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

5 posted 2003-09-13 08:06 AM

No kidding. I think I have a melody for this one (reaches for guitar)...very well done, Maureen, enjoyed the story/rhyme!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-13 12:14 PM

M~I love it...the rhyme was oh so perfect..

Susan

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2003-09-13 12:44 PM

Maureen ... yesterdays and present time ..I enjoy the way your emotional thoughts pour into rhyme

Hope

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