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kykspilla
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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:58 PM


I can't even cry no more!
I'm thinking of you constantly,
You hurt me, you took my heart
And now you're somebody elses
You'll never be mine again
My mind knows, but my heart doesn't

You betrayed me, you stole me
You took my everything
We're still friends
But I feel so much anger
You'll never understand
Nobody ever will

I dont even know if you think of me anymore
How could we be so close and now so far apart
I'll find love again, no doubt!
But a question will always be
Were you the one for me!

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-10 03:22 PM



Welcome to Passions, Kykspilla.  I hope you find Passions in Poetry to be your new poetic home.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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arthur
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2 posted 2003-08-10 03:30 PM


unrequited love
the pain of the broken heart
still -its good inspiration for the aspiring poet
welcome to PIP
arthur

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3 posted 2003-08-10 03:32 PM


Welcome to PIP..
great write

kykspilla
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4 posted 2003-08-10 06:06 PM


thx guys
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-11 04:10 PM


This reminds me of feelings I am left with when I rush from friendship to romance...much to fast I confess...and the emptiness that follows...most relationships should remain at the friendship level...or this...James
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6 posted 2003-08-26 11:57 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kykspilla, this is such a heartaching debut, sweet friend, unrequited love will always hurt no matter what, so if you get the opportunity again, let him know how you feel because he may be feeling the same way you are, it is worth always trying, right? I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kykspilla, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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