Open Poetry #28 |
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A Place Of Magical Space |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
![]() Webshots Fantasy Art Photo ~~**~~ She was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep It was completely magical this wondrous feeling of flow She held out her arm to look yes, her body was all aglow She felt as if she were floating on a cloud as soft as snow As she lay back to relax looking at scenes unfold so slow They were scenes from the dreams she had dreamt of on many nights With fairies and enchanting fantasies in a land filled with desires and delights There were castles of mystical beauty floating in glorious space She saw herself and her dear Love such peace upon their face They were floating on the same cloud the love and contentment felt she No trouble or trials of this life was there everything was happiness and glee Such fulfillment here they feel in this wonderful place in space Their feelings deep inside show clearly on their face Yes, she was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep ~~**~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-16-2003 02:58 AM).] |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
So peaceful, tranquil, like the innocence of a child. Great write. Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Lex. I appreciate your response. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oooh, this is beautiful..you spoke some of the thousand words that picture is worth! Wonderful, doll. ![]() |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
best not to wake up! arthur |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Karou. You always say the nicest things. I appreciate it, too. You are so sweet. ![]() . . Arthur, I know. LOL Thanks for your reply. I appreciate it. ![]() . . Hugs to you both ![]() Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You have a beautiful heart mind and soul. ![]() made me feel all calm and content again for a moment. one of your best here lady. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Ethel!! This has to be your best by far! Beautiful...magical...exquisite! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous penning,,,, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty thoughts Ethel...from a pretty woman. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae, you've outdone yourself! Everything about this post is magical and fills me with a sense of joy and wonder! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
funny thing, just last night . . . and dreams really are part of us enjoyed this Kraw' |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, thank you. I'm so glad that you liked it and that it made you feel calm and content, even if just for a moment. I really hope that things will be better with you real soon. Heart: hugs ![]() Ethel Mae |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Nancy. That makes me fell good for you to say that. I really do appreciate you. ![]() . . Glenn, I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you. ![]() . . Hugs to both of you ![]() Ethel |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, thank you very much. That's sweet of you to say. ![]() . . Linda, I'm so glad that it made you feel good. Thank you. ![]() . . Krawdad, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And, I do believe they are part of us. ![]() . . Hugs to you all ![]() Ethel |
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