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From Newborn To Woman
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From Newborn To Woman |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I wrote this for my daughter last year.She's the world to me. From the joyous time your child comes into this world You never knew there could be such a perfect, little girl The awe you see as she stretches her hands and little feet The magic you share, when the first time your eyes shall meet Giving her all of your unconditional love Just as she's protected by a white dove As she gets older through the years Let her know you're there for her through the smiles and the tears Watching her grow day by day Changing before your eyes in the most beautiful way Instill in her the dreams of life,love, and happiness Giving her all the values that life can posess Teach her to be anything her heart desires Teach her to chase her dreams like raging fires Show her she can be anything she wants to be From a president, to a star, or even a queen Teach her to have faith that life can be good Tell her how much about her you've understood As she grows older through the years Teach her it's ok to shed her tears For the day will come when she will leave you behind And you hope all that you've taught her, is easy to find From newborn to woman is a most cherished thought to hold From birthday's until the time that they are old Knowing that you love her and care for her as no other Showing that is why you became a mother For the day will come when she'll take flight And make you proud, joyous, and loving in every sight. angelblueyes sorry this is long not quite there on my form's yet. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but your heart is in this one... and it shows in your daughter's eyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sunshie:Thank you so much.Your comment means alot to me  angelblueyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Angelblueyes this is not at all too long and every word is precious. A wonderful touching write and ....... you have me in tears as my daughter has already taken that flight ... Your words are not only very beautiful, but also so very wise! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ohhhh I adore this one ... a mother's heartfelt words, what could be better? always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Margherita;You can call me by my name Crystal.Less typing hehehee.Thanks for the comment I hops I can instill in her all the confidence that my parents didn't take the time to do with me Janette:Thank you She is the life that is precious to my heart and soul angelblueyes |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
yes a daughter-a magical being arthur |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Arthur:Thanks.The magic she will create throughout life will be the essence of her soul. angelblueyes |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Don't worry about "forms." In this you state clearly for the child what it is to be a woman with a child who will grow to be a woman. Excellent. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
icebox:Thanks It means alot.angelblueyes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Angel, You write what you feel and is the best kind of form. Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Susan:Thanks my friend. angleblueyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like both of you have enjoyed every minute of it...I was just telling my son that he should cherish the time with his son and daughter because they grow up so fast...mine sure did...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very loving and tender write that your daughter will one day appreciate the depth of your love for her. This really tugged at my harp strings. A beautiful expression of maternal love. God bless you both!  Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James;They sure do.Seems likeyesterday theyw ere babies and now my oldest is in junior high.Too quick it goes EA:You are always the sweetest with your writes and your replies.Your name suits you well my friend angelblueyes |
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