Open Poetry #28 |
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Mars |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Here I am, Face turned to the wind, Summer breeze Flowing on my skin, Feel the sun Last ray of the light See the dark Soon will be the night. All the warmth has passed me by, As I darken like the sky, Accustomed don’t need to cry, All I give is a slight sigh. Here I go Drifting off with my thoughts, To the dark It is where my soul is brought, Mars is close Blood red crossing through the sky, Off I walk To shadows as war is nigh. Gloom Mars, the red planet, named after the God of War, is at it’s closest to earth in many years. Whereas the Ancients believed in the influence of the planets On the condition of things on the Earth, I sure it’s merely coincidence that American is involved in so much conflict, Like Afghanistan, Iraq, Liberia, and North Korea; merely coincidence. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful poem and so moving. Your melancholy is so deeply felt. How beautiful our red planet to observe now! Mere coincidence that wars are going on? Yes probably, but who knows for sure? Electromagnetism can do things to our psyche ... It seems that God Mars never relaxes? I think it is a question of awakening to the energy of love which IS. Library! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We're planning on doing some sky watching over the next few evenings...it's not eery day we get to witness a once-in-a-lifetime event... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at your list of "coincidences"--and the witch in me is nervous about September--I'll have to check the charts but I do believe Mercury retrograde will in opposition to Mars next month. makes me kinda jumpy-- thanks for the read, and the thoughts, PG. even if it does spook me. ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing write, Gloom.. I love your stuff. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I loved this. My hubby and I were outside last night looking at it and we've borrowed a friend's telescope to see it up close and personal at the end of the month. Marti |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Professor - it seems that for me, the best time to see Mars is early in the morning. It hangs in the south-southeast of where I live, and this morning the moon was full and beautiful - but did not detrack from the brightness of Mars, which was to the left of the full moon. If there were ever a month for star and planet gazing - now is the time. |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
tell me Professor Gloom that you do smile... I sense a very unhappy man... tell me i'm wrong.. I hope you find smiles every day... Wonderful write here.. minoune |
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