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Fair? Time |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fair? Time %20br&whorse.jpg) If you let me out What a display I would make Waiting to strut…Me My one, shining, brief moment I have waited for this time It is your Fair time But it is my time to shine Your hand strokes my nose You gaze long into my eyes Our souls, connecting, as one Your inner you rides And I would lope pastures green A pair we would make You with the wind in your hair And I, with my heart in flight [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-08-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a beautiful horse, and what a lovely poem. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I can't bear the site of such a magnificent animal in a cage. When i went down to the fair the last time I wanted nothing more than to see the horses until i saw them in their cells..broke my heart |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
To be free is all she and I wish to be I don't know if he or she... But I do know the wish to be free. I loved this, Karilea. Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
This is a very good poem. You did a great jb personifying the the horse. La di da, Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea, I have a thing with horses and animals in general . . . last time I took Billy to the zoo, I cried (I know nice stable mother) because it was all just so awful and when I see the horse trailers, in the heat of the summer . . . God . . . I always have this vision of a horse running wild and free . . . this is lovely thank you xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How wonderful..yet sad. To be able to run wild and free must be a yearning for all animals. Wonderful horse...beautiful poem... and yes, I am back!  ~Hugs YOU!~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your inspiration is always astounding! Eric |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
one of my father's pearls of wisdom, "Watch how people treat animals -- they'll treat their pets better than they'll treat you." not fair K, nope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, does this ever speak to me--the poem, you, and the horse!   Linda |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very light and fun!!! love the pairing of "your inner you" with the horse and the idea that the horse is anxious to be a vision of beauty Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow, isn't this the truth? You're right, I did enjoy it I'm putting it in my library... methinks you should get a horse judging by this poem There's nothing as unbreakable as the bond between an Arabian and her person |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
forgot to put it in my library but it gave me the chance to reread it There's nothing as unbreakable as the bond between an Arabian and her person |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - a pair to make... Nice thoughts... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My one regret... was to never have a horse own me, fully. Thank you all for your wonderful comments! |
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