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| Open Poetry #28 |
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Peeling back Feeling |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The humming sound Surrounds me now Coming from far away Horoscope says The stars * are aligned * That matters go my way Take for instance That coincidence, that which bears Some brewing consequence For there is an in to coincidence (And still the hum resides) Something Seems to be coming along I smell it like smoke’s fire Somewhere from the “way Out there” It’s bubbling my spirits higher The stars are setting up a course A way that I might walk I wonder if this hum is them, The spirits and their talk Oh, I know now What you’d say It’s up to me to plot my way But please, look here, The horoscope says… “It’s no coincidence All that has been going on It’s absolutely none of that All that is rumbling on… For you walked Among the stars And heard…the hums and whispers Of their words” As down my spine the feeling grows Through lift of arms I feel aglow A breathless lift of voice and cheer Something IS now working here… For this week has been a’bliss As nothing has truly gone amiss I feel that if the stars have sighed, And I, for now, Compelled to reply In thanks for something, I am not sure what… But perhaps that coincidence Is something that Can’t be bought. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Love the up feeling of this...and know it well. Lovely the way you shared it here...thanks! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really loved this, Deca. Especially this ending... For this week has been a’bliss As nothing has truly gone amiss I feel that if the stars have sighed, And I, for now, Compelled to reply In thanks for something, I am not sure what… But perhaps that coincidence Is something that Can’t be bought The stars know, don't they....  Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was a blissful write from one whose planets are all in alignment!  ~ May the stars forever light your way! EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
this was really an interesting and well done write... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Deca...what once so appeared on Monday to be the gloomiest cloud now 'tis the sun that brightens and lightens my soul. Was it in the stars or the black cloud that appeared to me that night...for my friend, I feel so free. Sorry...I know I have gotten of track here... I love this...you got me thinking...I need to go check my horoscope from Monday! Smiles and hugs! Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome, Deca! Love, Margherita  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
and still the hum resides.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got me thinking, too much...a good thing |
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