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You Comfort Me
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You Comfort Me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
The night is full of stars The night Is cold you hold me You comfort me When the moon Is high you put your sweet hands around me As cold breeze comes you whisper the words into my ears And then you comfort me With your love you touch me With your sweet hands My mind Is blocked Into this misty clouds And then you comfort me again With your love tenderly you knew I was alone Then you comfort me With your love |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
sweet poem...thanks for the read I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
My mind Is blocked Into this misty clouds And then you comfort me again With your love Ah, such beautiful words. Huggles, Marti |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such tenderness, lovingly shared. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"you knew I was alone Then you comfort me With your love" ~ Vandana, that would indeed, be a "comfort" !  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
They must be special indeed this was sweet and comforying to read Hope |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Hoping me and my girl find this again, great write. Jason |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, this is a really pretty poem. I enjoyed reading it.  Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to be comforted...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Just like a hug V very nice xxoo |
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