Open Poetry #28 |
no dead fly (repost for a smile) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
blue eye frost creased every line-- she dropped a menu in my face, tacky with the grease of time. and body of one dead green fly-- All of this beyond belief Still, I'm not the least surprised. But still, I'd like a pint of ale." From where I sat I smelled saloon. Remarkably, her pale skin paled. but I tell you whut... Behind that door? You'll find a floor that needs some sweepin' up." to a backstreet door. She smiled with eyes in wink of sly: "It's watchyer lookin' for." "Don't thank me. Just hand me five." I blinked and asked, "A five for tip?" She said, "Nope. It's five for sip." protesting, "I've not drank of ale." "It's for the water that you drank." I looked at glass and my heart sank... but for three cubes and no dead fly. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LOL...I liked this one gal... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the smile is yours... from me! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
HeeHee, you got a smile from me, Serene One Hugs, my friend Ethel |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Eewww...you drank a fly... ...great write!lmao Jason |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hmmm...I have had worse things.. I do not remember seeing this one before...so thank you for reposting and the laugh... Susan |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I want to know exactly what was behind that door? This mind of mine thinks much to much K . . . *smile* there, happy? LOL xxoo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Enjoyed the laugh...Paul I'm glad it was you and not me No dead fly in the glass Just ice cubes numbering three "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"My friends are my estate." |
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