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sunshinemc
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 27

0 posted 2003-09-20 02:42 PM

Where are you
Even when you're infront of me, you're somewhere else

Your mind fancies the wonder
and mine the regret

You are permenant in my heart, taking over
everything
Days of joy and laughs, and others of tears and tradegy

Could u recognize my face in the chaos
Or walk by as if I am invisable to you

I sit and stare into you're eyes
Hoping to endulge myself in your thoughts
Hoping to uncover the secrets you hide
Hoping to bring back the days when you weren't empty

Take me to the place where you run away and hide
the place where you suppress everything inside

Let me in your mind
Let me in your heart
Im begging you, take me back to the start

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-09-20 02:48 PM

a poignant plea

hope the intended heart hears this

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-09-20 02:53 PM

(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too wish for this to come true for you and for a second chance to be rewarded! (sigh) It is wonderful to have you here, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-09-21 09:06 PM

This is very nicely done, sunshinemc!

Poetry will take one back to all manner of thoughts, the good, the bad, the "what ifs".

This write has a bit of each.
(and I can't tell you how happy I am that you can express yourself this way...)

I see a talent for this in you.

~Uncle Ed

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-22 11:57 AM

This is good.A heartfelt plea that has it all.
Crystal

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

5 posted 2003-10-02 09:22 AM

i know exactly what you mean, maybe the other person will read this and be aware. this was sooooooooooooo awesome, thanks for the great read.

~sha-sha

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