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sunshinemc
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since 2003-09-20
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0 posted 2003-09-20 12:54 PM



No one will ever know the secrets that I keep locked beneath my bed

Or the depression that flows through my veins

Maybe one day i'll explode from the pressure

I'll watch my blood fill the streets, and my secrets rise to the sky.

In an instant, it rains
and my life is washed away.

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-20 12:59 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is such a sad and anguishing debut, dearest friend, all our hearts go out to you and send you angel hugs, I hope all of this is behind you now and now everyone recognizes your blood and tears, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your powerful poetry, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-09-20 01:01 PM


the weather forcast is for lots of sunshine

welcome
please don't explode
let your pen explode with words

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada
3 posted 2003-09-20 03:35 PM


dude! that was an amazing first write D it couldnt have been any more perfect,but its filled with so much saddness,but then again poetry is the best way to make yourself feel better,i hope you feel better now D
<3

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-20 03:40 PM


Welcome to Passions, sunshineMC! I do believe you've found yourself a new home away from home. Only exploding you need to do is explode on the scene with your writing--and that you have done very well!

Let it all hang out! We not only love writing poetry, we love reading it!--and replying to it! We're one big family of kindred spirits! Welcome aboard!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-20-2003 03:40 PM).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-09-20 07:32 PM


Welcome to Passions, sunshinemc...you must know, I appreciate your name!     Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

shara
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since 2002-05-21
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florida/USA
6 posted 2003-10-02 09:26 AM


how do you do it?  you keep relating to me with your words, well that's poetry for you, you think you are all alone then you read a poem and know that others go through the same things you do.  thanx 4 the great read.
keep writing and be blessed much luv

          ~sha-sha

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