Open Poetry #28 |
Mother Willow |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mother Willow Oh dear weeping willow blowing in the wind, do you have a story to tell? I shall relax quietly in your shade and oh yes, my friend I will listen well. Please share with me all things that you have seen through out the many days of your youth. Speak of those who have taken shelter here as they have looked out o're yon fields in endless search of light and truth. Whisper of lovers holding hands as you have danced upon the breeze... sometimes I have the feeling that your vision reaches further than that which we can see.... Oh Mother Willow who stands so majestically held in canvas of rising sun, share with me your history... and I will listen till day is done. dmsmith 9-20-03 I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-20-2003 02:02 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...my. This is lovely, and I know who I'm going to share it with...and I'll bet you know who, too... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Donna...our Gentle Spirit has returned.. and I know all of us here at Passions is so very pleased to read you once more. This is SO beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Oh Mother Willow who stands so majestically held in canvas of rising sun, share with me your history..." ~ this verse could stand alone in its beauty, imagery, and message. --"held in canvas of rising sun" ~ perfection! I will hold that thought whenever I see trees and mountains limned by the light of the sun or moon! Thank you, Donna! It is wonderful to see that you are up to writing your lovely poetry again!--altho' I have been enjoying your golden oldie posts! You've been really missed. Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such special places always have beautiful stories to tell and you do too! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
holding hands as you have danced upon the breeze... sometimes I have the feeling that your vision reaches further than that which we can see.... Oh sweet Donna, this is absolutely beautiful. It is so good to have you back. I've missed you so much and I know the others here at Passions have, too. Welcome home, my friend. Hugs Ethel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a lovely ode to the wonderful willow. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ When the spirits awaken you to the listening ... you pen your finest~ Lovely dear lady~ Just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
BEAUTIFUL! But then ... I bet you knew I would think this was special? Lovely words, picture, and thoughts this brings. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so vey much. I'm just settling back into writing again so I'm not really up to snuff yet, but I do appreciate all of you so very much. Yes Sharon....I thought you might not want to miss this one. I must have had my momma's will |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful |
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