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SPUD
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since 2003-09-10
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0 posted 2003-09-10 05:11 PM


Follow me
my mellow friend
fall along
with summers end
for deep within
the forest belt
the flora fades
the great ferns melt
woodland creatures
light and bouncy
gather near
their calls announce me
happy trees
in pure decay
brightly bellow
in shades of yellow
Autumn has arrived today.


© Copyright 2003 SPUD - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-10 05:14 PM


Spud, Welcome to Passions!  Autumn is indeed here...I can feel it, and see it, and almost hold it...

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

SPUD
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 12

2 posted 2003-09-10 05:21 PM


Thankyou very much that was a nice surprise. How did you do that so quick. You must live in this site, lol. I look forward to reading everyones work.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2003-09-10 10:01 PM


Welcome to Passions...and Happy Autumn...

Pleased to meet another fall fancier.
Great write...much enjoyed.  ThisDiamond

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-09-10 10:03 PM


Welcome to Passions.This was good and I enjoyed it very much.
Crystal

vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-09-10 10:06 PM



Enjoyed this very much, SPUD.
Welcome to Passions.

~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
6 posted 2003-09-11 09:31 PM


Cool write Spud.
I can picture it in my mind.

:-)

Ribbit

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-11 09:34 PM


Welcome, Dear Spud! Poetry like this will make me a faithful reader of your writing! I loved it!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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8 posted 2003-09-11 09:40 PM


What a fun poem! Excellent first post.... you're going to like it here, and folks are going to like you.

Can't wait to see your second (hundred)...

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-09-11 09:56 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2003-09-11 10:04 PM



Can I go hiking with you, SPUD?

WELCOME!!!!

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11 posted 2003-09-11 10:18 PM




Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-09-12 04:20 PM




(smiles) Yay! I love autumn, in fact, I love all the seasons, because Mother Nature has a special suprise in each one! (big hugggssssss) This is a gorgeous and colorful debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Spud, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2003-09-12 06:01 PM


SPUD,
A delight to read.


Legion
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14 posted 2003-10-10 07:08 PM


First posts tend to get a fair few replies just to welcome you to the forum, this isn't one of them.

Enjoyed the read.

CW

[This message has been edited by Legion (10-11-2003 07:27 AM).]

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