Open Poetry #28 |
why |
PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
how can we let one person out of millions and millions shatter us into pieces of worthless glass? It's not that we are not worthy or strong and don't love ourselves But one granular of sand of all the beaches in the world can ruin or devastate our lives. Why is this? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
amazing isn't it,,,
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I do love a piece that makes me ponder, PouringJewels, and this piece did exactly that. Well done, and welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more from you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--because we allow ourselves to become victims... We often give our personal power over to others and lose ourselves in the process. Thought-provoking write! EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Julia~ Welcome to Passions!! (I love the name Julia). I liked what you wrote, but I have to say that one person may mess us up but destroy us? Only if we let them... I look forward to reading more from you! Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It's only because we "let" these things happen...We know better, always did. Love you sister mine, Hugs ~Brother |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like your writings, they have power and emotion in them.....be well, be safe, be you! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tis a very good question indeed... I'll be looking forward to reading more of your introspective work... Nicely done, Julie... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Julie . . . I like to believe it is because we are the rare ones and full of love . . . beautiful writing xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I don't think I've welcomed you yet, so I'd like to welcome you to Passions.I think the reason is because we are a being that is full of such heart and soul that we allow ourselves to be touched deeply by someone.We are not here to live our loves as being cold and hard, but as tender and sweet as we can be.Just my opinion.heheh Crystal |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
"But one granular of sand of all the beaches in the world" it's simply because we care more about that one granular of sand, than any other on any other beach in the world. because it is our granular, because it is our heart. very thoughtful poem. :Þ and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I see this as broadspeaking and innerspeaking the nation and ourSelves a question we all need to ponder Nice Julia |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I like Sue's answer...smile. A good question, Julia...and one many have pondered. Hugs to you, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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