Open Poetry #28 |
Settling for grey |
PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Blackness surrounded me with no warning Spiraling my whole being Any hand, I will grab To pull me out of this dark hole I see no color, not even white Maybe tomorrow I'll see some grey |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my !! how sad! I wish you colours upon sunshine for your day - be well, be safe, be you! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You are a unique person..i too could not see the colours but now i do..you will see them if you allow your heart to be touched completely by something..try letting the colour into your heart.. Goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
oooh Julia . . . mann to just see grey . . . I know this and it aches but you sound positive you will reach that spectrum You sure have here with your writing *smile* xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes....there are times when gray would be such a brilliant, squintingly vibrant color that it seems almost too much to wish for..... I know those times. Thanks for this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
There certainly are times when we all would settle for grey... Nice job!! Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ahh, now THIS one I love! And think you'e gonna like posting your writes here...They've been in your drawer too long. (And the one you wrote for me? It was wrong of me to forbid you to it. I'm honored you wrote it... Truly! But you know how I am) Keep writing, you're doing great! Love, ~Brother |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Grey would look good right about now. *S* I like this very much... welcome to Passions! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know that color well |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julia~ I have reached for the colors and found them just a heartbeat (or a piece of poetry) away~ This write is vivid~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Julia... I really like this one. Very nicely penned, indeed. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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