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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-20 07:46 AM


Between

Between the scares of livid white
Dance the memories of delight
Phantoms of a ghostly hew
In the shadows of review

For me my magic carpet waits
Right outside my shambles gate
And I can stay the days declare
As long as it remains out there.

It is my lifeline in the flood
That keeps me from the scud and mud
It takes me into heavens realm
And makes me think I steer the helm.

It is a passage of the mist
A fantasy with a twist
It’s here I play the hand of God
With just a smile and a nod

It’s not a secret my dear friend
It helps your passage to the end.



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1 posted 2003-09-20 08:16 AM





Good morning Sy...

I would gift you with
a few lines or two
but now you have me
in a brew...


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-20 08:21 AM


Sunshine
Well then brew a good one my dear.

Gemini
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3 posted 2003-09-20 08:34 AM


You have such a way with words.  Well, you just do, very eloquent.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-09-20 09:11 AM


Gemini
Thank you my dear.

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5 posted 2003-09-20 09:21 AM


My Dear Aladdin, why don't you come up and see me some time! I'll be on cloud nine!

Fly, baby, fly!
EA

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-20 09:26 AM


Earth Angel
Why you are a close neighbor. I'm in section eight. LOL An old army joke.

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7 posted 2003-09-20 09:46 AM


It is a passage of the mist
A fantasy with a twist
It’s here I play the hand of God
With just a smile and a nod


Lovely my dear Seymour. Wonderful write for a sunny Saturday morn. Where is Enchantress with the tea? Goodness gracious, and I have hot biscuits with honey ready! hugs to you my friend, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2003-09-20 09:49 AM


"It’s here I play the hand of God
With just a smile and a nod"


Oh, I'm lovin' that Sy. Such a wonderfully rhythmic Saturday morning piece to make me smile.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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9 posted 2003-09-20 09:51 AM


good read,,,,

                                    

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-09-20 09:54 AM


Chris,
I expect her any moment now. Save the goodies and we'll tea together.

Kit,
Good morning sweet and I wish you a bright and lovely morning.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-09-20 09:55 AM


QjQ
Thank you for the read and comment my friend.

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12 posted 2003-09-20 10:04 AM


Morning Sy!
I know I'm running late...
But here I am with a hot cuppa for you...
Wonderful morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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13 posted 2003-09-20 10:21 AM


Between the scares of livid white
Dance the memories of delight
Phantoms of a ghostly hew
In the shadows of review

For me my magic carpet waits
Right outside my shambles gate
And I can stay the days declare
As long as it remains out there.

It is my lifeline in the flood
That keeps me from the scud and mud
It takes me into heavens realm
And makes me think I steer the helm.

==================================

Now why would ya need a magic carpet when ya got a Randy dragon? LOL
Between the scares of livid white


yer so kewl...love that lines intend.!!


did ya get the link to the pics I sent you?

*ww*



"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

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14 posted 2003-09-20 10:31 AM


Uplifting words.
Thanks,
Eric

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2003-09-20 11:02 AM


Sy~

  You brighten my mornings.

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-09-20 11:59 AM


Nancy,
Thank you sweet, be right there for the tea.

JM,
Yes got the pics and will write you tonight.
And yes I do have Randy but he has his limits. LOL WWRS

Ericc
THank you for the read and reply.

Susan,
THat is always nice to do. Hugs

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