Open Poetry #28 |
Purpose |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
There is a purpose for the good and bad that life gives us At times the pain seems unbearable and then I see a family in mourning a dog with three legs a child alone I shed a tear for their pain not my own and know I will make it through I kiss the warm fur on my cats head and see There is a purpose for the good and bad that life gives us |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I try hard, many moments and days to remember just what you have written here. For we have lost perspective of what is good, bad, what is needed and what is just a want. Thanx for the wisdom of this.... And I am sorry I don't read you more often, for you speak much truth within your poetry. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressed well,,,
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*sigh* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Magnus~Thank you..and trust me you aren't missing much..just random thoughts that seem to need to seep out.. Q~Thank you as always Aenimal~That one word touched me..thank you. Meg~You really amaze me..the way you write and how sweet you are with your replies..thank you for gracing me with both. Susan [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-18-2003 09:05 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So true..very much so. Full of SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I'm glad I cane across this before going to bed.It holds such heart and meaning that I see what was there all along.Thanks my friend. Crystal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, anyone that thinks life is supposed to be all good, or will be all good, is in for a big surprise...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Much truth and wisdom here, Susan. Sometimes we need the bad to remind us to appreciate the good. Thank you for the reminder. When the power of love overcomes the |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Susan, This reminds me that even though I may think that at times I got a "raw deal" - I really didn't. The 3 legged dog line gave me a vision of an Alice In Chains cd cover's artwork. Enjoyed! Well expressed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is great and significant purpose in all things, if only to remind us, how truly blessed we are, and what we have been showered with.... This was a very wise write...thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all! All of you are way too kind. Truth~ this was written b/c I have been having a "down" week and needed to remind myself of some things. The three legged dog~lives across the street from me and I am convinced he has no clue he is missing a leg..that is what I need to remember... all of you! [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-18-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Susan...well done. Yes there is a purpose to everything. Our life experiences are where our writing comes from. I am sorry you are having a down week. Thanks for sharing the poem though...it was worth the read. |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
This was beautiful, hard to imagine a world where there is no suffering, no pain. But then, would there be no passion, no fire inside either? I do agree with you, there is a reason for all of it, a purpose. But sometimes, oh sometimes.. how can there be a reason for a grieving mother holding a dead child? There are those times.. when its difficult. Great poem, thought provoking. ~ becky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - I agree that there is a purpose for the good and the bad, but geez, why does the bad have to hurt so much at times? But I have found that it too passes... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Susan, It takes the long journey to find this perspective, and the wisdom you convey so well in all your works is so refreshing...and so very pure. Fine write. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all! I love you guys so much! Susan |
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