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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-09-20 01:21 AM

Is it wrong to love you
I'm sorry i'm invisable
I'm sorry i'm so transparent
If you'd only look,
You might see a glimmer of me.
You make me feel so far away
I'm not here
I never was
That should satisfy you
That should make you happy
Does this feel good?
I hope my tears drown you
Maybe then you'll feel my pain...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-20 01:30 AM

Chelsea...lots of raw emotion in this.
You've expressed it well.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-09-20 01:41 AM

Chelsea, such hurt is felt here. I hope
things are better soon, if this is from
personal experience.

Hugs

Ethel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2003-09-20 02:37 AM

what a sad write bella - good to get your emotions down on paper though - keep writing. Be well, be safe, be you!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2003-09-20 06:58 AM

This is sad but at the same time beautiful...you will have someone see who you are and know you completely in future days...you are unique..you already have a gift...your gift is being able to convey your emotions so well..thank you for the words....

Goldenrose.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-09-20 12:10 PM

It may hurt, but this kind of pain is very much like an algebra problem....so difficult while you're doing it, but afterward it looks so easy to solve that you feel silly for having had to work so hard at it.

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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-09-20 12:33 PM

Sadness comes to me when I think about how we always deserve so much more. In the equation we aren't the lesser, we are greater than all the hurt! Never forget that.

Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

sunshinemc
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 27

7 posted 2003-09-20 12:56 PM

Wow, this is deep and I can definetely relate. Feeling invisable is the worst feeling, so jus get up and find someone who will be happy to have your company. I enjoyed your writing, keep your head up!

Muah,
sunshine

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