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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-03 06:05 PM

Weave me
a new shade
of blue
upon my skin
this one
fails
to suit
sew it snug
select view
of unopened
sky
the kind of
blue
that is
multicoloured
with
layers of
renewal.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-09-03 07:23 PM

Beautiful writing, Gemma.

Hugs to you, little lady

Ethel Mae

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-03 07:25 PM

Absolutely beautiful

Crystal

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-09-03 07:30 PM

loved it

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2003-09-03 07:44 PM

Now I know I'm going to like this place. What a sweet and gentle poem!

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

5 posted 2003-09-20 01:28 AM

Many times I've looked into the sky, so blue, and wished that I could somehow absorb it through my pores until I was like a saturated sponge. Filled with all the promise of a blue sky.

Your poem makes me feel like its possible.

As usual, your words are tiny jewels held in the palm of those who read them.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-09-20 01:32 AM

Oh...liking this, Gemma...beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2003-09-20 03:20 AM

Gemma, I like this!! Brava bella!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-09-20 09:46 AM

Blue....yes, that would be the color for you, and a good one for the symbol too.

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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-09-20 10:34 AM

Simply stunning in its beauty.
Great write!

Eric

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2003-09-20 10:58 AM

Gemma~

Loved it!

Susan

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2003-09-20 11:09 AM

"A stitch in time ..."

      The sky has always been yours,
        silks of blue, powdersoft whites.

           And a smile that shines forever!

    Wishing the best for you ALWAYS.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

12 posted 2003-09-20 11:46 AM

Loved it! Wonderful verse. Each word was held for a moment upon my lips and then asorbed into the very crux of my being. Bravo!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

13 posted 2003-09-20 12:58 PM

stop making me want to keep them all.......................................................................................................................

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And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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