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like a mad woman |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I’m tired of waiting of the impatience in my voice of hearing it over and over I’m just tired my throat hurts my nose drips I’m like a mad woman walking backwards recalling a past life perhaps a more patient past life and I hear my childhood call out to me mariaaaa mariaaaa what do you want? I feel like that message in the bottle just floating along trapped and hoping hoping for what? I’m not even sure I’m not even sure that if I knew I would be happy I’m just tired yes tired of everything that must be it I mean what else could it be? Me? fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (09-19-2003 11:02 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...Such angst in this...and I just have to tell you, the you I see is beautiful!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Maree, I'm sorry to hear you're feeling trapped somehow, sweet friend, we all feel this way every once in a while but I echo Martie and say that we love you just the way you are and just by following your heart, you will find what you're hoping for! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2003 01:32 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow, Maree...this is just...wow... felt every word of this one as I read. SO good to see you writing, my friend. Agreeing with Martie...you are beautiful. When the power of love overcomes the |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maree, what an interesting poem this is.... it kept me hurrying down the page from the title all the way to the last word. Wonderful writing, lady. Would love to see more of your work.  Hugs Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Fabulous! I want more... I just like it look forward to every word you post I take lessons Yes.....more.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
si si brava bella brava!!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Maree this is oo good . . . I’m like a mad woman walking backwards recalling a past life YES, someone please stop me from tripping over myself . . . Amazing, you are and you? No, trust me on this . . . *smile* xxoo |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful poem Mmy-- ( ~ahem, why wasn't i sent a link?~) sometimes i wonder the same things--but usually decide it is more a case of 'what if- and regret' than of being tired. big poohbear hugs babyroo JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I’m just tired yes tired of everything that must be ~*~ Oh, do I know this... Wunderbar! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you know i feel/felt this..hugs |
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