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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-09-19 08:13 PM


so where have you been
and how
has it been going?

it has been a while
since smiles were last
shared

cynical
as it may seem
numero uno is no more
and two is hardly there
no one managed to last

yesterday’s news
in back pages
drowned
in the floods
of sensational
tidbits

now all those
dominating
are
blanks

in this game of
scrabble

eh?
did you want to win
this game?

© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-19 08:19 PM


I hear you loud and clear.Regrets are not a good thing.I hope my ffriend that you have more joy than regrets.
Crystal

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-09-19 09:19 PM


Perhaps a friendly truce is in order to bring order to something out of order?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-19 09:23 PM


enjoyed your write,,,

                                    

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4 posted 2003-09-19 10:21 PM


Sometimes it's best just to say that the game is tied. No regrets...right? hugs to you my smilin' friend, Chris


Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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5 posted 2003-09-20 01:39 AM




(big hugggssssssss) I believe both tying or losing is better than winning in this particular game, dearest friend, if you lose at least you can start over and not have to look back so much with the burden of the beast on your shoulders, and winning regrets are only bound to repeat themselves! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-09-20 01:49 AM


Hello, sweet friend  
I've missed you and your words around here lately.
It's good to see you here tonight. I hope things
are better. This poem seems a little sad?
But written excellently, as always.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2003-09-20 03:28 AM


Hello to you this is the first I have read of you - wonderful write bello!
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8 posted 2003-09-20 07:08 AM


enjoyed the read very much!

Charisma

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2003-09-20 09:57 AM


"did you want to win
this game?"

Excellent Sudhir. I love the way you wove your thoughts into this piece. Ahhh regrets ... I have a few.

Wonderful to read you and see your smiling picture, my friend.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-09-20 11:13 AM


yep...

Susan

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11 posted 2003-09-20 10:45 PM



Send this one to Nan, Sudhir...
she would be SO appreciative!

Excellent, as always!

Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2003-10-13 05:44 AM


thanks a lot, my dear friends for your support... and kind words, of course...

regards
sudhir

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