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from the brink |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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speaking of black what do you see? talking of direction where do you wish to go? so there's a new friend so there's someone crazy when being is not enough stormy dreams are vague like spiders hanging by a thread don’t say light never fades it is not the right thing to say now sing your sweet song and be your merry self sing of light moon sun stars and I see how they shine shine for you in the clear in the best of worlds there's that picture of a smile almost forgotten closed in tough doors imprisoned behind walls like a mention of life in a single sentence of no consequence there’s no escape for there could be never a slate so clean as it had begun no restarts allowed from the brink of certain things inconsequential |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,, I liked the format,,, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
experimenting, as always, my friend... thank you ... glad you liked it...  regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (09-19-2003 08:15 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Glad to see your writes again.I like the way you think and experiment. Crystal |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
like a mention of life in a single sentence of no consequence Sudhir, very cool lines here...i wish i have written them myself... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love the way you stand on the brink of think and bravely take the plunge nice experiment! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) So very true, sweet friend, there are no restarts, just going from where you are and arranging and spring cleaning your junction ad going from there! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks a lot, my friends... regards sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exceptional write! |
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