Open Poetry #28 |
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playing minesweeper... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
funny though, that I must say this: playing minesweeper are hearts treading in small steps laden with caution yet trying to be as light-footed as possible for all it takes is one block in this happy world where would be placed a devious mine that blasts the heart inside-out after all, kiss and tell is a gamble with large risks and small dividends yet ironic it is that most hearts are willing to play fire with fire ~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir I must send you a mind sweeper. Enjoyed |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
yet ironic it is that most hearts are willing to play fire with fire This write...a slow burn in my mind that will remain as a lesson of irony. Thanks for this. Patricia |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Honey, Kevin Costner can sweep my mind and pick my brain...anytime...hehehhehe, seriously...this was, as all of your are...very incredible. Thank you for sharing |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah nicely done..and an insight into the way our hearts often rule our judgement. I enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have played minesweeper on the computer and I can appreciate the comparison! ![]() Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oooh! This struck me as really creative, lol. Love the comparison, as I've also played minesweeper ![]() I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think this changes some with age and finally one realizes that sometimes your heart doesn't exactly give you the right answer. Nice to read you again Sudhir. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Your reading this and replying to this are very much appreciated, my dear friends... regards sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent write! |
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